Not much to report. It’s been a bit over two weeks and no requests. I did start thinking about what might be keeping my manuscript from instant success. Re-read the first three chapters [again] and decided the first chapter needed a better ending; one with more of a bang than Addy waking up from a daydream. It also introduces one of the main characters; her father, right away. And answers some questions I had about Addy’s motives.
One of the agents I have hoped to submit to opened her queries yesterday. We communicate on twitter, mostly about dogs and from what I can see on her tweets, we’d get along. I’m ready to work on improving Dragon Dreams, if I had some idea on how to do it. Up to now, I’ve done what I can. Someone with a finger on the pulse of middle grade readers might be the answer.